Saturday 28 May 2016

Pancake Stories

We are learning to write a 3 sentence story.
1. Tell what I am writing about.
2. Describe it.
3. Tell how it made me feel.

Here are our pancake stories.

Te Kauri wrote:
I like the pancake.
I like the pancake because it is yummy.
I like the pancake because it is warm.

Dhiveer wrote:
I like the pancake.
I like the pancake because it is yummy.
I like the pancake because it is big.

Brooklyn wrote:
I like pancakes.
The pancake is cooked and warm.

Kavel wrote:
I like pancakes.
The pancake is nice as.

Hesioni wrote:
I like the pancake.
I like the pancake because it is warm.
I like the pancake because it has Nutella.

Gabriella wrote:
I like the pancake.
I like the pancake because it is little.
I like the pancake because it is warm.

Cartel wrote:
I like pancakes.
The pancake is yum.
I like pancakes with Nutella.

Tulaai wrote:
I like the pancake.
I like the Nutella.
I like the little pancake.
I like the tasty pancake.
I like the cooked pancake.

David wrote:
I like the pancake.
I like the pancake because it is sweet and delicious.
I really like the pancakes with Nutella.

Priththika wrote:
I like the pancake.
I like the pancake because it is yummy and sweet.

Faafua wrote:
I like the pancake.
I like the pancake because it is tasty and it is round.
I really like the pancakes with Nutella.

Viena wrote:
I like the pancake because it is sweet.

Jedazaiah wrote:
I like the pancake because it is good.

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